“This Friday” a poem by Madison Lovelien

My lovely daughter Madison has written a poem that I want to share with you all, so she is my guest blogger for this blog. The poem is titled “This Friday”, and I present it to you now. I’d love to know what you all think of it. Thanks for reading this blog.  

-Ron-

“THIS FRIDAY” by Madison Lovelien

This Friday

Wake up

Put on  your clothes

Eat Breakfast

This Friday

Wave to your

Family

As you leave the house

This Friday

Your tools bump up against

Your thigh as you walk

The dirt road

You enter the city

Busy

Crowded

Loud

This Friday

The sun is already telling you it’s late in the day

So you hurry

Through the crowd

To your job

This Friday

Your boss tells you

Where to go for your job

But that this time there’s something

Different

Unusual

About it

This Friday

When you arrive

It’s the usual

Women sobbing over the situation

People taunting

Others wondering

This Friday

But…

There is SOMETHING different

You go to your partners who are

Holding his wrists

Holding the nail steady

Waiting for you to pound it in

This Friday

You raise your hammer

Steady your hand

And

Look at His face

His eyes are sad

But

Not for him,

For them

Us

You.

His body

Weak though once strong

His head

Covered in a mocking crown of

Thorns

Above a sign reads

Jesus King of the Jews

You look away

Questioning what has this man

Done?

This Friday

The other workers tell you to

Hurry up

You raise your hand once more

The sky darkens

You pound down

Hard

He winces

Cries out in pain

But doesn’t pull His wrists

Away

Like He

Wants to

No…

Needs to

You finish the arms

And

Move to His

Feet

This Friday

Raise the

Cross

Hear Him

Gasp

Cry out to

The Father

“It is FINISHED!!

And YOU did it

We all did

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Published in: on April 30, 2010 at 9:05 pm  Comments (1)  

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  1. Beautiful poem Madison! Thanks so much for sharing. Keep it up! :)


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